Devils Portal Read Count : 122

Category : Books-Fiction

Sub Category : Fantasy
The day of my graduation i get shoved by this guy called max. He clenched his fist and thrusted into my gut and I fall to the ground. I get back up clench my fist and thrusted into his face. He then goes to the floor. The lights switch off leaving us in eternal darkness. I head to my class and so I sit down. I get a phone call from a mysterious phone number. I ask my teacher "can I be excused" she said "yes but be quick" so I go outside of the class. I heard a deep voice saying " it's Satan can you come to hell so we can talk" so then I answer "how do I get there." He goes "I can open a portal to hell but can you come" I answer again "ok". Satan opens a portal so I thought what can be so bad.

 I jump through the portal and I see a big red guy with red horns and red wings so I thought to myself "this must be satan ". I talk to him and he says that he's my father. I now know why I have a tail and so I go home to my mum and my dad who i thought was my dad but isn't. I talk to my mum and she said " I'm sorry for not telling you, i know I should have but it would have been too much to handle"

After she finished talking i storm upstairs in anger and I thought to myself to go to the top of the golden gate bridge and jump because if other people find out they would bully me for it. So I sprinted up there and hung off the edge and I look over to the ground and jump. When I get halfway there wings made of blue fire appeared and I started flying so I thought I'm a freak. I feel my head in despair and felt fire horns and then I look back at my tail. I see fire on the end of my tail.

I call my dad and ask him to open a portal for me to jump through and talk to him. When I get to hell i asked my dad first of all, if I could have a button to be able to make portals to hell and back to earth when I want. I say to my dad "can I stay for a few days so you can teach me how to use my fire properly and teach me how to fly better." He answered with " yes sure just tell your mum first or she will wonder where you are. " . I make a portal and jump through to tell my mum and she is fine with it. 

My dad have me a sword which is a katana sun that if anyone tries hurting me I can fight back.Later that day, I go back to earth to go to sleep but I couldn't and so I thought to just sit and think about how I'm the son of Satan and how people are going to be afraid of me because they think I'll kill them or torture them. I go downstairs, get a drink of warm milk and walk upstairs. When I get to the bed I drink it and I fell asleep.

I go to school and I just fear that people are gonna have me. When I get to the building max comes up with all his mates and jump me. I then get really angry and my tail appears out of my pants and then I lit on fire. They get scared of me and run off so the I started chasing them to hit them so when I caught up, I grabbed max with one hand and clenched the other and punched him in the jaw and he falls to the ground, crying for his mum.

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  • needs more emotion and eg similes

    Apr 14, 2018

  • thought it was ok actually

    Apr 14, 2018

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