Hide And Seek (book 1) Read Count : 202

Category : Books-Fiction

Sub Category : Drama
I woke up on the cold ground floor. As i started to get up i notice i wasn't in my apartment anymore. Then i heard footsteps they were coming louder and louder. Until it was quite again. Then the lights come on. And a guy wearing all black with a black mask starts walking towards me as i start backing away theres a voice. "Lets play a good ol game of hide and seek" i tried to talk back but my voice was gone. 

"But this time it depends on your life" and when i heard that i suddenly got my voice back "what do you mean" i ask. I know a dumb thing to ask but hey! " if i find you in 10 minutes you die but if i dont you get to live" then again i lost my voice. "We start now go hide" then it was pitch black again.

I ran though the little room until i found a door. I found the knob and opend it and there was light! I ran and it smelled like rotten flesh. I ran up the stairs then down again when i heard footsteps comeing down. I hid under the staircase. And i saw him go into the room before.

I run up the 1st,2nd,and 3rd floor and hid under a table. I had 2 more minutes to go. Then somone flip over the table. And it was him. "Haha you lost" SLAT! He missed, i ran downstairs and hid in a closet 1 more minute to go....

Hey guys!! This is the writer and this is only part 1 so stay tune for part two of hide and seek! And im sorry if it was crap...this is my first time.

Comments

  • Erica D

    Erica D

    i think this is a great start. it is an interesting premise. you could definitely fill it out some with greater detail, but still a great start. i look forward to reading more

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