Moonlight's Gaze (the Calling) Read Count : 144

Category : Books-Fiction

Sub Category : Adventure
Chapter 1                                      Menai
Cave

I stop running, realizing that I've lost them; I look around for a safe hideout. My eyes trail onto a close by cave, once I'm inside I see my initials and realize that this is the same cave I found last summer. I sit on a rock I spray painted red and I close my eyes for a moment. That's when I hear something, no, someone. I slowly turn around and feel cold but not really cold as in cold, more luek cold as in chilly. I think for a second and then it hits me, was I already caught?! No, Impossible; I left them in the dust a long time ago. This is someone else. I slowly start to see a shadow and then there was a scream, unfortunately that scream was mine but then I hear a second sceam. After a while I'd decided to stop and so did the shadow. Is stand up sort of scary like and with the bravest voice I could fake at the moment i say
"Show yourself! "

And I'll end that right there. I'll post what happens next in about a week. Rate, like, and comment, (and message me) if you want to see what happens next. If you are wondering, Moonlight's Gaze is a book that i'm in the process of making and decided it would be fun to release it here in pieces. I know it was short but I like to end things like that and it was the best spot to pause at. Bye for now

Comments

  • I'm interested in reading more of your story

    Apr 21, 2018

  • this isnt the original copy and I was more or less rushing to do copy it from my computer. So as a result, the punctuation might be a bit if and there could be some issues with the way I wrote it here. the original copy is in book form and I'm half way through the book because for some reason I wrote so much of it and than I realized I could put it here as a kind of preview of the real thing.

    Apr 22, 2018

  • This is really good, a few errors with puncuation. And a few other issues. But I really like this idea of yours ! and think you should keep writing ><

    Apr 22, 2018

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