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Apr 21, 2018 | Rating : | Written by A Girl Writer

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Hey everyone, so I would love if you guys could hear me out, or offer any advice if you can.

In my fictional stories, I have noticed something for a while. And it's been bothering me. (Well there's quite a few things I notice) But the one I want to focus on today is : Action/Fighting scenes. I know I'm lacking in this area. And I'm continuously trying different things to improve. Being more desriptive- then I feel it's moving to slow. Just explaining movements- then I feel it's missing something. I didn't take into consideration how hard it would be to make a interesting, flowing fighting scene. And now my stories might end up lacking! •×•

As I want to throw more action scenes in, in the future. But don't really want to experiment too much while in the midst of my story. So, if anyone has any tips or tricks they like to use, or know of ? It'd be greatly appreciated!

Thanks so much for listening.

Till' Next Time.

Comments

These are one of the reasons why I'm not really fond on writing the actions....but you have to make your story interesting somehow, am I right?

Apr 21, 2018
Facing same problem, get all built up to a big battle then cant write it right...

Apr 21, 2018
im getting to yhat part in my next chapter and i dont want to over desicribe either but for fight i vour use a diffrent pov like 3rd person objective if you dont know what it is look it up

Apr 22, 2018
Rocky Lee NAILED IT. i intend to learn from that too. next step thier stories list.

Apr 22, 2018
your writings are amazing. I think you can describe actions more by just explaining the foreward and backward movement. explain every moment. for more text me.

Jul 05, 2018