A Sad Story: Pt.2of2 Read Count : 133

Category : Stories

Sub Category : Suspense/Mystery

Charlie's Devotion pt.2

Months had passed by, and the young girl decided to come back to her old village. As she frantically makes her way back to the spot she had last seen Charlie, she can't help but think to herself 

"He won't be there... Someone must have came for him! There's no way he'll still be there". 

As she comes up on the park she had left Charlie in, what she sees she can hardly believe. There was no dead dog, nor had he been taken in by someone. But Charlie was there, still waiting. He lost all his weight and was skin and bones with dirty, knotted hair. His bones were seized, from not moving for so long. The young girl dropped to her knees in front of the unsightly Charlie, with her face in her hands she began to weep uncontrollably. Just then a elder villager came walking by and asked 

" Oh, is that your doggy ? He's been here everyday, the local villagers tried to bring him home or feed him scraps here and there. But he just wouldn't budge for anyone. Do you know this dog?

The young girl turned to tell the old man " It's ALL my fault !!! I didn't deserve a friend like him! And now Charlie's going to die !" As tears poured down the girls cheeks. The old man looked at the young girl and then at Charlie and said 

"but look child, he is still waiting for his friend." 

Just then the girl whipped back around to face Charlie. Her eyes grew ever so wide, as Charlie just slightly lifted his head off the ground. His little nose flaring as if he could smell a familiar scent. His tail gently wagged as it dusted the ground. Then he put his head back down and gently closed his eyes, as he went into a peaceful slumber. 

 ~~~~~ The End ~~~~~

I hope you all enjoyed my Sad, Short, Story ! ^^ 

It is my first 'Ever' Sad themed story compared to my Adventure or Romance genres I usually enjoy. I will periodically update/change/add or just organize ANY of my stories (as I have with this one.) So feel free to always check back on the Stories you've enjoyed from me. They might just be different >< 

& Don't forget to go through my profile and check out my other Writings! There is my weekly slice-of-life Blog, and My Short Story: Flame-Haired Hikari. As well as The Title: The 5 Brave. Under books!

 As Always, Till' Next Time ><



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Comments

  • Apr 17, 2018

  • That image... is kuroko’s dog??? Plus this story sounds like that episode in Gintama lol

    Jun 26, 2018

  • The image is off google, I always use pics from any Animes that fit my story. I haven't seen kuroko, but i’ve heard of it ! ^^ & And I absolutely Love Gintama! That is where I got the inspiration. For this sad Story. Although it is written completely myself ><

    Jun 26, 2018

  • nice

    Jul 05, 2018

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