Flame-Haired Hikari Ch. 2: More Questions!? Read Count : 190

Category : Stories

Sub Category : Fantasy

Chapter 2: More Questions!?

Frozen in fear, Sora was about to drop to his knees. A blinding light appears in front of him. It's the glow from a beautiful maiden dressed in a black trench coat, with fair skin, big scarlet coloured eyes and hair so deep red it looked as though you would burn you if you tried to touch it. In the few moments Sora was being dazzled by this beauty, he had almost forgotten about the disgusting "monster" before him. But as he looked at the "monster" in front of him, it was now in two chunks of dark, rotting flesh disintegrating slowly on the road. And the "beauty" appears to be sheathing a sword ?! 

《Agrhhh !!! I can't take this anymore! Just WHAT is going on exactly !?!》

Sora let out in one full breath.The Flame-Haired girl turned to face Sora, with big eyes and a confused expression.

《Eh? ...... you can see me ?》

《Of course I can see you! What are you talking about? And WHAT was that thing !!??》 -Sora exclaimed.

The Flame-Haired girl looks around, and mumbles to herself.

《Hm, well this isn't right.. he shouldn't be able to see me, unless...》 

Her face changes instantly to a serious tone, eyebrows furrowed as she walks straight up to Sora. Places her right hand on her sword in the sheath, and in one fell swoop, her sword went right threw Sora diagonally and back into its sheath. As she says 

《Now then, tell me... what exactly are YOU?》

~~~That's the end of Chapter 2~~~ Chapter 3 coming soon.

Comments

  • better, but why foul? that was a hang up point for me. did the movement stink? I don't think that is the right word... now I have to look it up. keep writing though.

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