Broken Read Count : 132

Category : Books-Fiction

Sub Category : Fantasy
Hi my name's... Well that's not important. I am here to tell you the story of well my life.
I am an outcast, a creep, a freak... I am a monster. I live in a little cave off by the waterfall not to far from a few houses.  I have no actual house it burnt down when I was little and I tried to get my parents out but I ended up.... not helping. I died in the process. I woke up next to my body as the fire went in slow motion. I heard a noise coming from the room my parents were in and I followed it. I wish I never did that. The voice asked me of I wanted to live. And of course  I said yes. And when I woke up I was laying outside in the back of my house. When I got up I saw something traumatic. There were two big body bags being carried out of my home. I froze and cried. Someone told me to come with them but I ran. I ran and ran and ran and ran. Until I ended up at a cave thatI now call my home.
 " Haha come on back hurry up!" " I told you to stop calling me that and stop acting so happy." ' what the who's that?' I woke up to see two kids wondering around by the waterfall. One looked like he was my age. He was tall, had red hair, and green eyes, he was wearing a ripped up shirt that lumberjacks wear, some boots, and ripped up pants. The other one looked to be 6 or maybe 8. She had long brown hair that looked like it was shot at, orange eyes, and freckles, she was wearing an old long sleeved grey shirt, black torn up shorts, boots, and a ribbon around her left leg. I went to investigate. I slowly and quietly walk behind the rocks. I wasn't even 10 feet close to them when the boy looked over to my hidding place, threw the girl into the water and yelled " COME OUT I KNOW YOUR THERE I CAN HEAR YOU!!" 8 came out of my hidding place and slowly walked over to him when I noticed to girl hasn't came up yet! I run right passed him and I jump into the water! " HEY GET AWAY FROM HER!!" the boy yelled as I searched for her under water that's when I saw an otter in the water. But it had orange eyes. It jumped out of the water and into the boys hands. " She saw me. RUN!!!" The boy turned into a wolf and ran toward my cave. " Wait hold on!" I yelled and I ran after them. I found them behind a rock and ad I walked towards it the wolf pounced and pinned me to the floor. " OW GET OFF OF ME!!!" I screamed as he dug his claws into my shoulder. I was in so much pain I turned into my animal form, a fox. When he saw that I was a fox he let me go and helped me up. " Kaddie! I need you to heal her!" The little girl ran to me and her hands turned orange as she healed my shoulder. The boy looked at me said sorry then walked to the front of the cave and just stood their with his arms crossed. " OW rude." I scoffed. " don't take it personally he is always like that. He is actually really nice. Oh I'm Kaddie and that's Jack..." " I told you to stop calling Me JACK!!" his voice echoed through the cave and Kaddie winced. " well I don't know your real name and your sort of a jack a**! Sorry anyway what's your name?" " My name is..." " Shhh" jack shushed us and he pointed outside... There it was "the creature that killed my aunt! Why is it here" wait how did she know about that thing? " I don't know Kay but it is probably hunting us. Hold on" Jack turned into a wolf and howled as loud as he could and the noise looked like it hurt that creature! " Yay Jack!!" He rolled his eyes and told her to go to sleep. As she fell asleep I made a fire and me and jack sat next to it. " You never told us your name you know." " I'll tell you when I know your name." As jack laughed he looked like he was going to pass out and he did. On my shoulder. " HEY isn't this supposed to be the other way around?" I asked and he chuckled and said " To bad I'm tired." As he fell asleep I looked at the flame and dosed off... 😪😪😪
    

Comments

  • Nice

    Apr 13, 2018

  • Needs work. there is alot of grammar and formatting issues. a new paragraph begins each time a new person speaks or a new topic is discussed. there is never a space before a sentence after a quotation mark and they are always capitalized. "This is an example of how to write a conversation statement."

    Apr 20, 2018

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