The Stars Ahead Of You Read Count : 122

Category : Adult

Sub Category : Adult Romance
I woke up with Ash near me I struggled to get up. The grip on my wrist were tight. Let go please.... Ash let go of my wrist and eased. Why did do that? The look in his eyes seemed hurt.I don't know. I saw bruises on my wrist. Trying to cover them knowing he didn't mean to.

What's wrong Ash? He mumbled stress.What stress? Family problems.What problems? I don't want to talk about it. He said viciously,okay. I'll see you tommorow. Ash slammed the door leaving. I know he is just a friend,but why would he be so angry enough to grab me.

I took a shower afterwards hoping it would help me ease the bruise was like a wad on my wrist. The water scolded the bruises. I got out of the shower and looked in the mirror.I had bright blue eye's and tan skin I never broke out , wore glasses and had an curvy body flat stomach toned legs and arms.I also had curves on the side and small sized breast. 

I put on pjs and went to bed.I woke up to the alarm for school. I fell off my bed trying to turn it off my back throbbed afterwards. I noticed the bruises still I wore skinny jeans I wore 0 and wore a half sweater saying me rude never.

I grabbed my back pack after brushing my teeth I swayed my long hair back my hair was thick and dirty blonde as I put my hair in a ponytail.I got on the bus and waited to see Ash. I hope I can help him.

Comments

  • it would be so much better if it wasnt so confusing. just put the things the character says in quotes. for example, "I am Ash." so we know when a character is talking.

    Apr 08, 2018

  • Moka  Sanders

    Moka Sanders

    okay thank you for the help😂

    Apr 08, 2018

  • great idea, id love if it were longer. the structure is poor though, make sure to use quotes "stress?" to indicate someone is speaking. and you may have too many commas. please continue

    Apr 08, 2018

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