Flame-Haired Hikari Ch. 1: Don't Look Back! Read Count : 192

Category : Stories

Sub Category : Fantasy

Chapter 1: Don't look back!

A young boy named Sora, who is an average high school student. He is shorter than his male friends; and, fairly skinny. With short black hair and dark brown eyes, there’s nothing special about this ordinary boy. He’s attending his first year at high school today. Suddenly whilst taking his new route to school, a dark haze came creeping up around Sora and a few other citizens on the street. Although, it looked as though everyone around him froze in time? Sora, squinting to look through the thick haze as he grabs his chest and starts to feel suffocated. A giant, oozing, evil-looking monster is climbing its way out, from the shadow of a tree across the street! In complete disbelief, Sora starts to panic and bolts it in any direction! As far away from what ever it is he saw. Starting to gasp and cough for air through the thick, purple, tinted haze. Running only made his heart race faster. He goes to look back to see if there’s anything following him. Only to find an enormous, dark, dripping face with a big grin and no eyes in its sockets. Inches behind him, only a breath away from his face. Sora wants to scream, but his brain won’t even comprehend that basic command! And in that moment, a flash so quick his eyes wouldn’t have caught it if it weren’t for the bright, fiery-red hair that dazzled by him.

~~~That’s the end of Chapter 1.~~~ Chapter 2. coming soon.

Comments

  • very nice story so far

    Apr 03, 2018

  • Kingdom hearts inspiration Laugh Out Loud. Try to sway from the story line or note it as FanFiction.

    Apr 03, 2018

  • A Girl  Writer

    A Girl Writer

    Thank you so much for the support so far everyone >< I have taken notice to the similarities between my Story and K.H ! and want to say that the plot is completely different from that at least ! sorry for any confusion or misleading !!

    Apr 03, 2018

  • you got so much potential

    Apr 03, 2018

  • A little immature for your age, and a few spelling errors, but a good hook. I will read more.

    Apr 06, 2018

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  • Apr 17, 2018

  • Like what Landon said lol, sounds like Kingdom Hearts

    Jun 14, 2018

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