Outlet
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Category : Poems
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When I'm feeling blue,
Ruled by thoughts of you,
I try to get a grip,
To not let myself slip.
Eventhough it can be hard,
Resistance fall apart,
Still I hide my pain,
Owning that I'm insane,
Underneath this mask,
To smile is such a task.
Learning to be strong,
Eventhough I've been wrong,
This time, I belong.
Comments
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Awesome work! You know what I was reminded of as I read it? Dr Franklin use to teach us to pack as much into each sentence as you can, and if possible, make each sentence a complete poem all by itself so that every line could stand on its own feet if removed. It is an effortless read; one of my favorite of your poems, Zee.
Apr 03, 2018