Murder Revenge Read Count : 122

Category : Stories

Sub Category : Horror
David Grayser was walking home from school. He goes walking home wich is about two miles away from school. He checks the time to see that its 3:35pm. It was windy with the depressing grey clouds. "Hopefully it dosent rain" dave said. Two minutes later he felt a little tiny water drop fall on his hand. "Oh no" he said, he walked faster before it rains and gets wet. As he walking he felt someone fallowing him. He turned around to see a 5ft tall skinny guy wearing a mask. It was like a halloween mask from that one horror movie called 'The strangers'. Dave's heart was starting to raise for some reason. He wasnt that scared because the stranger in the mask was from a very far distance. He ignored it and kept walking. Right before when dave was about to turn around to see if he is still following, his phone started ringing. When he checked it was just his mom calling. He answered the phone, and his mom was just wondering if he got back home safely. He responded to her that hes almost there and hung up the phone. He ran back to his house and locked the doors and also closed the blinds. He was in bed texting his friends. It was raining outside really heavy. Everything was going nice and chill, until he heard a knock at his room window. This time he started to panic a little. He scared to open the blinds and check who's knocking. He took the guts to do it and checked. He opened up the blinds and the same tall skinny person with the mask standing outside that window, staring into his soul. Now his heart started raising, he got his phone and took pictures of the stranger to show the police, just incase something crazy happens. He went and grabbed a kitchen knife for protection, after grabbing the knife he heard a door slam. Dave took his phone and ran to the bathroom and locked the door. The lights were turned off and was hiding in the bathtub. He immediately dialed 911 and told them that someone broke into his house. He heard footsteps coming to the bathroom. The police was telling him to stay with him on the phone, but dave hung up. Its been three minutes and haven't heard nothing. He slowly walked towards the door with the knife on his hand shaking in fear. He slowly unlocked the bathroom door and walked out. He crawled to his room and stood up. He was looking around making sure no one was there. In his closet door he heard a squeezing noise. The stranger in the mask came out of the closet door with nothing on his hands. Dave was in shock and didn't run away because he thought the stranger had no weapon. "Back off man i have a knife, the cops are on the way" dave said. There was a weird stare between the both. Until the man pulled out a gun from the back and shot dave in the chest. Dave was in the ground suffering in pain, the man walked up to him, to just see him laying there in pain. The man reloaded the gun and shot him again BOOM!!!. And everything goes black for Dave.

To be continued. 

Comments

  • not bad

    Apr 02, 2018

  • NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO WHY *SNIFF* I -I IT'S SO SAD

    Apr 02, 2018

  • good one i need more and more

    Apr 02, 2018

  • Jayy G*ILLEN

    Jayy G*ILLEN

    Thanks guys part 2 will be coming soon.

    Apr 02, 2018

  • RIP Dave. He was a great boy. XD

    Apr 04, 2018

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