The Thing Came From The Water Read Count : 120

Category : Stories

Sub Category : Science Fiction

It, the thing. It rose up out of the water,at first it looked like a dinosaur. But it kept rising up out of the water until it was the height of a skyscraper. It feet were the size of a house. Its claws the size of a tractor. No one knew what it was ,all they knew was that it was dangerous . It flattened city's , it destroyed buildings like the were Lego's.

But I'm getting ahead of my self ,let me tell you it from the beginning. It was like any other friday, I got brushed my teeth, went to the bathroom. And sat down and watched TV, I was watching  , "Godzilla" , the 2014 version. About 3 hours later I felt the ground shaking and I looked out at the sea, I lived in a beach did house in the USA.  I saw the water moving around and swirling. Then it started rising out of the water. The moment I saw it a thought of Godzilla and turned around and ran. It started chasing me, I knew a couldn't out run it,but it was so heavy that its foot steps nocked down trees. I saw this and jumped between to of them that had fallen parallel to each other . it walked right over me because I between them. Somehow I had just barely managed to escape. As it walked away I noticed that it was covered in bone plates at least 15 feet thick, the only place not covered was it eyes and ears. The military finally got out some defenses after what seemed like years a and after 2 cities had been destroyed. They brought tanks and fighter Planes. Neither had any effect the government didn't know what to do. Nothing could stop it and the more it destroyed the bigger it got. So finally after it had rampaged for almost a year the military had made a containment cell dug straight into the ground . it was hundreds of feet deep. The monster know was about 2567 ft tall , the cell 3000 ft deep. Now the question was how were they going to get it in there. After dangerous testing they found out it was attracted to shiny objects. So the government got a plane and covered it in mirrors and engine the monster into the pit. Were know anyone can go and see if



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Comments

  • please read this is a preview

    Mar 31, 2018

  • Julija Kluskina

    Julija Kluskina

    i love it so detailed maybe you can add so metaphors or similies maybe even some personification?

    May 05, 2018

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