The Forest Read Count : 219

Category : Books-Fiction

Sub Category : Thriller
Two teens in a store, what's  the worst that could happen. Caiden was was getting a bottle of soda, while Nolan was getting a bag of chips.
    All of a sudden there were gun shots in the back room. Then two men holding a dead body came out. They dropped the body on the ground. One man was big and had a lot of muscle. The other man was smaller with less muscle. "On the ground!" The bigger man yelled. Caiden quickly slid around the corner to the next ally where the men could not see him. However, Nolan was on the ground lay in front of the man practically crying. 
   "Hey boss look at that ring." Said the smaller man. Nolan had a ring that had a big diamond on it. "Give it to me." The big man said to Nolan. "I can't it's my dead mothers ring." Cried Nolan. The big man pulled out a gun. "Give the ring to me or I will shoot you." Said the man starting to get angry. Nolan refused to give the ring to them. Then Nolan put his hands on his chest and closed his eyes. Both of the men stood there suprised. "You have five seconds to give me that ring or your dead." Nolan did not move. Five, the man counted. Four, three, two, one. Then..... BAM. Nolan was dead.

STAY TUNED FOR PART 2

Comments

  • 👍

    Mar 30, 2018

  • me again, good start but it jumps into drama to fast , other than that very good beginning, will read part 2

    Mar 31, 2018

  • Nice... But expressions are too fast

    Mar 31, 2018

  • Ciara Mcclain

    Ciara Mcclain

    thx

    Mar 31, 2018

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