Mar 29, 2018 | Rating : | Written by K.R.M ????
THE HAUNTED TREE HOUSE #CHAPTER 2 Read Count : 106

Category : Books-Fiction

Sub Category : Suspense/Mystery
The next day."Well kids say good bye to your good old house" "Im gonna miss this house alot" "yeah me too little sister but it was too old so we have to move" some minutes later."Here we are Our new house" "Hello mr." A men said "Im going to show you the house" We walk to the back yard "here's the pool over there is the back door and over there a tree house there's alot of legends but dont worry its completly safe" "Mom,Dad can we check it out yeah sure this will be your house after all if  you need something then come inside we will check out the house but be careful" "OK!" The kids climed the stairs "Wow look molly it look's just like the tree house of comics ink" "yeah comics ink" molly said "Wow look at this COLORFUL ROCK!" The kid tried to pick it up but when he touch it the tree house started to shake "ouch my hand!" Bruce said."well we should go find mom and dad the kids went down stairs and when inside the house.


To be continue.....

Comments

  • Yo've got a good idea, but you need to clean it up. It's confusing to read because the dialogue between characters is mixed up.

    Mar 29, 2018

  • Veda Nidamarthi

    Veda Nidamarthi

    amazing story but you need to filter it and write it with some good words and also you need to put some punctuation so we could understand and it wont be confusing. But then also a good story.

    Mar 30, 2018

  • ok thx for commenting

    Apr 21, 2018

  • Apr 22, 2018

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