Forgotten Chapter 1 Read Count : 132

Category : Stories

Sub Category : Suspense/Mystery
There once was a boy and his friends, (Mark who was 13, Brooklyn who was 13, Leonardo who was 12, and Angela  who was 12). It was Marks birthday and he had just turned 13 and for his. birthday he invited 3 of his friends over for a sleep over. His parents had to go leave for a minute to go pick up his cake from the bakery. Mark and his friends were playing truth or dare when Mark started to feel a strange presence almost as if someone or something was watching him then all of a sudden they here a loud crash coming from the basement. Then everyone was daring Mark to go down in the basement to see what was going on. Finally Mark went down into the cold dark basement. But he realized it was only his cat Breezy, Breezy had just knocked over an old painting. "Oh it's just Breezy he replied back to his friends after they asked him what it was. But then he noticed something  weird he saw a metal object lying behind the painting in curiosity he grabbed it and took it upstairs. He then set in the middle of the room, but suddenly it started shaking then  stopped shortly after and the strange object started to shine. And before they knew it Mark and his 3 friends were taken to a strange and unfamiliar place.

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    Mar 10, 2018

  • Good start!!!

    Mar 11, 2018

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