What's Wrong With My Life Read Count : 106

Category : Stories

Sub Category : Suspense/Mystery
Chapter one the beginning. Hi my name is Daniel and you probably wondering about the title yes I know it's kind of weird that called what's wrong with my life if I could show you but I can't I'm in some room. If they put me in here because well? They say I'm crazy. Whatever I'll just tell you the story that he think they told me because I don't remember what happened. They say they know what happened well here's my story. Narrator: I'm here to tell you Daniel story. Chapter 2 the telling. Narrator: so this is what happened Daniel is 16 years old and he was a junior high school it was a normal day for him like everyday goes to school does what goes to other classes when does work. Sounds very boring but yeah is nothing like another day at school until third class. Science 8:43 when he asked to go to the bathroom what he saw in there... Was... Was horrible there was a man in there with a knife the man turn around and Daniel screened. Daniel:ahhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!! Narrator: the man said be quiet the man ran out and give Daniel the knife. Daniel went out to chase the man but he was gone you turn around and there was a lady she screamed murde!!!!!!!! Daniel: no it's not what it looks like. Narrator: but it was too late the lady ran off and Daniel how to do something he look both ways he saw the door and ran out. Chapter 3

Comments

  • Not bad, I like the story but there are different ways to go about telling it. look up different p.o.v while writing. that might help you out. Good luck.

    Apr 20, 2018

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