Gray Rose Page #3
Read Count : 146
Category : Books-Fiction
Sub Category : Suspense/Mystery
She woke up with a start. Cold sweat running down her forehead,but she didn't gasp. No sound came out of her lips. Silently she sat down on her bed,she was a small thing compared to it. Some of her hair was covering one of her eyes,so she pushed It back with care. Her tence arms were tightly grasping her bed sheets. Slowly but calming, she let a small sight in relief, then rubbed her still sleepy eyes and reached for her glasses at her bed stand putting them on. Her eyes startedto adjust to her surroundings and it all hit her at once. "Right." She stated bluntly. She had just moved to this condominium. Wanted to start her OWN life,independent,and at her own way. She had tought in having a roommate, but none of the girls she tought would be ideal to live with wanted to. She was all alone,and her dad had already practicality "Explained" to her that she would get no help from he's part if she left. She still dared to leave her home and become an independent woman.
Comments
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the flow is still off and spelling needs to be checked* and i didnt understand the word choice "practically" explained. did he explain or not? i think you meant "implied" possibly? (he had practically "implied" that she would recieve no help) makes alot more sense. But i Love your premise for this story! and think you should keep writing !
Apr 08, 2018