Gray Rose Page #2 Read Count : 116

Category : Books-Fiction

Sub Category : Suspense/Mystery
As she stoped walking, the air grew, a chill ran down her spine.
This wind was harsh and strong. Intimidating even.
It forsed her back with tremense forse.

Her foot didn't found floor and  down she fell down with a SPLASH into darkness.
She knew this feeling.
Remember it.
Feared it...

She was drowning.

Her legs kicked frantically,eyes closed shut,and hands swaying in desperate grasps,but nothing being grasped.
Her strength was leaving her body faster than needed.
Bubbles leaving her helpless form.

She felt numb,helpless, but mostly...scared.
She wasn't thinking anymore,how could she,in these sircumstances?
Without even noticing, she had stopped fighting and was now lying in emptiness hope.

Her eyes slightly opened,the moon's shine reflecting her gaze.
Sad and lonely...but with no worries to think of.

But then, out of nowhere a near splash coming from above her covered the moon leaving whatever that had come down with her a mere shadow to her eyes.

'Is that someone... '
She hoped faintly, she would pass out any moment now.
The figure approached her,it seemed...male?
She wasn't sure, her gaze was a dark blur now.

And she passed out...into night black.

Comments

  • Please be patient ti'll later, i need to sleep,if you're liking it so far please comment! Farewell!

    Mar 14, 2018

  • You just need to fix a few spellings but overall good job!

    Mar 14, 2018

  • is spelled force not forse

    Mar 14, 2018

  • other than spelling, and a few spots you could change, to make the words flow a better. this is a good story so far.

    Apr 08, 2018

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