Questions Or Suggestions?
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I really liked how y'all love my stories. I have been waiting to do this story for about 2 years. So if y'all want any suggestions put in the story (It has to connect with the plot and what has already been told) Lately I have asked my friends if they want Blue and Luna to stay as wolves or turn to human. If they turn to human they can turn back to wolf to do other adventures. If they stay as wolves they do even greater adventures. Polls: Stay as a wolf III Stay as human II I won't do this again untill part 6. So you can ask me anything. (How I juggle school and write books)
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keep them as wolves. also use this mechanic as a way to taunt them to the evil side. the baddies should know it's impossible but pretend they can. two more things. 1. Luna, Rose, and Blue need a love triangle. 2. slow your pace, you are too quick to get through topics. make each paragraph a topic and use all the different sentence types to keep the reader reading. I semi like the introspective form of communication you use where sometimes he explains to himself what he wants to ask, but it is a little strange because I feel like there might be a better way to write it.
Apr 06, 2018