Sally And Pally
Read Count : 127
Category : Stories
Sub Category : Childrens
Once a girl named "Sally" had a twin sister named "Pally". There parents died when they were 4 . Then a girl found them for foster. The girls name was "jamink pooliet" she was Mexican. Now I will tell you the story.
After 1 week
Sally had went to pick up pally and both of them saw there parents. They thought they where dead but apparently they weren't. When Sally and pally went over to there parents there parents where very happy. They went home as a family and always stayed together.
THE END.
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There is a couple grammar mistakes and it is quite short for a story but, it has potential. Just add some detail, develop the plot a bit more, add more indirect detail rather than direct detail (like have a conversation where you figure out the girls' name instead of just straight out telling us), add more mystery and dept to the story and such.
Apr 20, 2018