Silent Screams Read Count : 146

Category : Adult

Sub Category : Horror
Chapter 1:A broken friendship|Violet:Helpful,Kind,Smart.Violet sits in the back of the truck and leans to the side while Angel drives like a crazy,Drunk person.Angel:Rude,Insecure,Jealous.Violet stops leaning and loses it and says "STOP!Drive like a normal person Angel"Emily stares at Violet with shock,Violet had never lost her shit but today was the day these teens get drunk,some boys get lucky,And they celebrate the death of Ashley Bennett and Violet wants to enjoy it.Emily:Funny,Animal lover,Kind.Jason,James,And Robert stare at her also.James:Nerd,Has crush on Violet,Nice.Jason:Weird,Likes sports,Popular at school.Robert:Hates school,Leader of the football team,Popular at school.They arrive to the cabin and Violet gets her bags and walks in the cabin.A woman walks in and says "You guys are from California,Right?Emily nods while looking at the woman and the woman says "I'm Amy,James and Violet are in this room"Violet unpacks while James does the same as Violet and she says "I'm Violet..I'm Emily's new friend"James starts to think "Wow I didn't even know her name and I have a crush on her"The Sun goes down and Emily wakes everybody up and says "Lets go make a bonfire"We all get outside and Violet and Robert gets the wood,James and Emily gets the gasoline,Angel and Jason gets the matches.They all arrive back and they put everything where it should be and they sit around it and Violet walks in her cabin and James follows her while he thinks "Okay,This is my chance"James pats Violet on the shoulder to get her attention and she turns around and says "hey,James,What is it?"James stares at her and says "I have a crush on Hot,And I know it's not normal but-"Violet kisses James and releases the kiss and says "You,Meet me at the lake tomorrow..Everybody is gonna be there"James stares in shock as she walks out like she didn't kiss him or that he said he had a crush on her.James gets out a book and starts to read his book called outlast,Outlast is a horror novel about a man who goes in a abandoned hospital.While Violet was outside with the others,She said "guys,I don't wanna prank James"Angel rolls her eyes and smirks and then says "You already kissed him..This prank is going to happen,Can't believe he actually thinks you are gonna get down with him at the lake"They all laugh except for Violet.Violet gets up and says "Angel,That friendship book had a rule that said Don't EVER prank your friends"Angel turns around and says "Well,Im changing those rules"Violet Scoffs and says "You are such a bitch!When Emily introduced me to you I thought you were a nice person,BUT NO,YOU ARE A DECEIVING BACK-STABBING BITCH!"Angel slaps Violet and kicks her in the stomach and says "FINE!YOU WANNA TELL THE TRUTH?I GOT SOMETHING FOR YOU VIOLET!Emily has been telling me some things"Emily stands up and says "No,Angel do not do this"Angel pushes Emily out of the way and says "Omg!Violet is such a whore and I can't believe James has a crush on her,i mean its like who would like that bitch..Those were Emily's words"Angel gets closer to Violet and says "If you wanna play hard,I'll play harder"Before Angel can slap Violet again,Violet grabs her arm and starts to twist it but Robert,Jason,And Emily start to pull her back.Angel glares at her and says "You won't see it coming,Nobody will..Nobody will hear you scream..we are in a camp where screams are silent!!!SILENT SCREAMS REMAIN HERE!!"Angel laughs and starts to cry and laugh at the same time while Violet gets pulled back to the cabin she is in.She walks in as they let go of her.Violet walks up to James and says "I'm going to sleep"Violet walks to her bed and sleeps. 

The end of chapter 1

Comments

  • story and you are working on it's very excellent I do have to say that is a few things still that you could improve the first part is the timing of the story everything goes by too quickly and doesn't give the reader enough time to learn about the characters number 2 is your dialogue is lacking a good dialogue is always a good key point in a story they're more dialog you have the more motion shows in your characters and number three even romance stories have some sort of plot twist but other than that the story was very good I even found it interesting enough that I recommended it to a friend of mine

    Feb 10, 2018

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