Feb 19, 2018 | Rating : | Written by ????????vampiregrl???????? Vamp
My Life As A Vampire Book 1 Things Just Got Weird Read Count : 126

Category : Stories

Sub Category : Drama
CHAPTER 1
 Hi I'm Alex I'm fourteen and tomorrows my birthday and I turn fifteen yay I'm so happy.  Today's Monday first day back to school. I have two friends there names are Cole and sapphire, sapphires my best friend for life. Cole is my boyfriend but he's almost sixteen.  Sapphire is fourteen and I'm now fifteen. Today I will have me birthday party I'm so happy. Everyone at school is invited of course I'm not popular but whatever. "Hey Cole hey sapphire","Hey babe". "Hey bestie".  "Babe you will never believe what happened ".  "What happened ".  "Brittany got suspended ". "Omg you mean the most popular girl in school got suspended ".  "yep".   "Wow well I have to go to class bye".

Comments

  • Mario Gomez

    Mario Gomez

    U have a good syart just slow it down dont rush and use definition like define ur characters

    Feb 20, 2018

  • Ramaya Lewis

    Ramaya Lewis

    I'm only twelve and I don't even write like this. I would usually expect older people to write more maturely. Just clear up your story a bit. That's all there is to it.

    Mar 04, 2018

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