Feb 02, 2018 | Rating : | Written by Veda Nidamarthi
The Forest Chapter 1 Read Count : 156

Category : Stories

Sub Category : Adventure
There were four friends named Sam Robin Tina and Rita.They were the students of a school they went to a forest for camping,when they got down the van in a hurry they forgot their bags in the van and they got lost in the forest.The forest was filled with fog and they came far from their tents and got lost but they forgot that they had their mobiles with them.They walked and walked and walked but they could see only the fog around them and Sam shouted can you see something there.

TO BE CONTINUED IN THE NEXT CHAPTER.

Comments

  • I like the ideas, however, if I could critisize? I would say to flesh it out more and use better grammar and punctuation. Also show, don't tell. But, overall a good story and concept!

    Feb 02, 2018

  • thanks, I'll try in the next chapter

    Feb 03, 2018

  • Alexander Harris

    Alexander Harris

    f**k d**n s**t

    Feb 04, 2018

  • tu3ehfyryehdhdhdur

    Feb 05, 2018

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