Is It Love?
Read Count : 207
Category : Adult
Sub Category : Adult Romance
James:"Its been years,decades since I seen her...why don't I go and see her your probably wondering....she had this boyfriend I know he wasn't good for her...I just hope she found out what he was doing....I just wish I could've told her what I felt for her..."Mrs Anderson:"James.... Go see her if you have feelings for her...I know you were only 17 the last time you saw her...now that you are 23 and she is 21 and your having your school reunion tomorrow...just be prepared...well that's all we have for today.."James:"thank you Mrs Anderson".James walks to his car and gets in his car and drives home...he gets inside the house and walks to his bedroom and sleeps..(the next day)James wakes up and gets ready for today..he drives to amiee's house..he arrives and knocks on the door..as soon as James knocks the door opens to reveal his bestfriend amiee... Amiee:"James I'm glad to see you after 7 years...just so you know Lisa is 2 hours away"james:oh thank god...its been 7 years since me and Lisa seen each other"amiee:me and Lisa stayed in contact for the whole 7 years..and she broke up with Cory...so you might have a chance.."James:I don't know...i feel nervous about this.."before amiee can speak there's a knock on the door..James gets nervous as amiee opens the door..when the door is open it reveals Lisa..amiee:"Lisa its good to see you here"Lisa:I wouldn't miss it when my bestfriend's are here"James walks up to lisa.James:"Lisa..its been 7 years..".Lisa:I know...who knew this would be all of us here" tonight? James:"hey Lisa do you still like to sing?".Lisa:no not really.. I don't like to do that anymore..its not worth my time"James:wow...it has been long....7 years later you don't like to sing...amiee wants to dye her hair now...Cory makes his own video games...everything has changed"Lisa:it has....this day might be the last memory we all have together...or we won't see eachother until the next 7 years later...if this is how this is gonna be...we have to make this the best memory for our first reunion.."James:"your right".Amiee:"hey guys! We are getting ready for cake"Lisa:"lets go"James:"okay" James and Lisa walk in the dining room for cake.Cory:"I'll cut the cake".sarah:"umm no ill cut it"Amiee:guys....this is the only day out of the next 7 years we will see eachother...don't start with the arguments...just cut it together"lisa:"James...".James:"what is it Lisa?" Lisa:"do you remember when I was dating Cory?" James:"yeah,why though?" Lisa:"you were gonna tell me something on our last day of highschool..what was it?" james:"that..I wish you a happy relationship" Lisa: oh...well that sounds like a jinx" James:"I'm really sorry Lisa" Lisa:"don't be Cory decided to cheat on me..."before anybody can get cake the cable turns off.Amiee:"ughhhhh ohhh my gosh!!! Cory go fix the cable please and James you go with him" James:"okay"James walks outside to the cable box with cory.James:"why'd you do that?" cory:"what do you mean?" James:"I mean why the hell did you cheat on Lisa?" Cory:"Lisa wasn't even that pretty so don't try it with me" James:"What was Lisa to you Cory?! Was she your toy?!"Cory:"I don't need to take this"Cory pushes James out of the way and walks back in the house as Cory walks in James sees a white car that he knows he has seen before as he looks 2 girls get out of the car.James:"Angela and Mariah?!"(information:lets start off with James..in James's freshman year he fell in love with a beautiful girl who you already know.James was a shy boy in his freshman year..his child hood friends was Mariah and Angela...James did not know it but Angela had a crush on him until amiee came along..amiee had all of James's attention mostly because Amiee and James would always hang out...that made Angela want to get rid of amiee...Angela tried to but amiee ended up breaking Angela's arm they never spoke of it again...but back to James...James was 17 when he first met lisa.James doesn't know this but Lisa was cory's girlfriend since middle school..James always wondered why Cory always hung out with Lisa..and then Lisa showed up kissing Cory..James felt really sad about it..but he got over it...that's all the information about James)
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it's a great story you ever in 5 stars but there are two small issues that I should point out and the only reason I point the amount is because I do the same thing. the first issue is the simplest one your description of your characters and what's going on go by way too fast you should take your time and describe what's going on a little bit more and what do the characters look like and act like
Jan 21, 2018