Slight Pause #1 ; (No Title Yet) Read Count : 137

Category : Books-Fiction

Sub Category : YoungAdult
Okay. One of my major problems when it comes to my writing is, I have A lot of trouble describing characters and what they look like. And as a reader myself I know it is rather aggravating when the author doesn't describe the characters and I end up imagining the characters looking completely different then how the author imagined them.
 So, instead of a new chapter today. I'm posting this, which will be a description of all the characters we have seen so far. 

The Twins:
 Emmett and Elliot are identical Twins and brothers of Elizabeth. Both have light brown hair and blue eyes. Slightly chubby. 9 years old. Elliot is 1 minute and 43 seconds older.

Olivia:
 Age 16. Cole's younger sister. 5'5. A cheerleader. She has long black hair that goes down to her waist. And bright green eyes.

Elizabeth's parents:
 You honestly won't be seeing A lot of them. They are just there. I might give them and actual role though. Mom had light brown hair and brown eyes she's really tall and into fashion. Dad has dark blond and blue and green eyes. (They change according to the light.) He's medium sized and very scary looking. (I don't know how to describe scary.)

Coles parents:
 They are also not major characters but maybe this will actually end up changing. They are described in chapter one, (By Elizabeth)

Cole:
17 years old. 5'7 Black hair and green eyes. He's a total jerk. But only at school. Hmmmmm

Elizabeth:
Elizabeth has short brown hair that goes to her shoulders. Her eyes are light brown. She is 16 years old, in Olivias grade, however, is in classes a grade level above hers. (Coles grade level)

Ross: 
He is mentioned at the beginning of chapter two but I don't know what ill do with him soo yeah.


SORRY GUYS FOR NOT DOING A CHAPTER TODAY BUT THANKS FOR READING ANYWAY.
WITH LOVE,
Jewelsđź’™
 

Comments

  • Thanks for describing them with a bit more detail! Also try describing the settings a bit more!

    Jan 19, 2018

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