I'm Lost. Read Count : 113

Category : Poems

Sub Category : N/A
I can't find my way,
 my path, 
 my soul,
Where am I?

Why I can't see anything?

Why I can't sense anything?
I can't move my legs,
My arms,
My fingers,
I can't smile,
I can't laugh neither,

What should I do?
Why my eyes keeps flowing out tears?
My eyes are watery,
My fingers are feeling numb,
Help me,it's so dark,
The light ,
That will lead me,
Is gone.

Within the darkness,
I fell into the abyss,
I can't get back how I used to be 
Anymore.
No matter how much 
I screamed,
I cried,
I can't go back.

Comments

  • nice

    Jan 14, 2018

  • Nitika Vats

    Nitika Vats

    Nice

    Jan 15, 2018

  • This is really good but more of a poem than a tv script.

    Jan 14, 2018

  • The description is written in vivid detail. However, this is more of a poem, not a script. Good writing, though. Well done!

    Jan 14, 2018

  • Bossmania 2001

    Bossmania 2001

    more of a poem, but good

    Jan 15, 2018

  • Kyoka Jirou

    Kyoka Jirou

    Thank you! I already changed the category. XP

    Jan 15, 2018

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