Dec 28, 2017 | Rating : | Written by Katy Lambers
Rose In A Bush Chpt 9 Nearly Loved Read Count : 132

Category : Stories

Sub Category : Romance
He talked slowly that made me nause. I pressed my back against the wall. Moka its fine. You want to watch a movie and cuddle? Sure I smiled.I got under the covers and snuggled by him. I felt the warmth of his breath on my neck. You smell like peaches he whispered. Ash sqeezed my hand and whispered do u love me? Yes why? I asked shocked of the questioned he just asked. Well it seems ur alittle scared he said. No im just feeling nause. You sure? Yes. He spooned me as we fell asleep. I woke up to feel his warm breath on my back. His arm around my waist that made me relax. I fell asleep once more for the night.

Comments

  • its great

    Dec 28, 2017

  • great start, practice writing structure and punctuation. would love to see more.

    Dec 28, 2017

  • loved it. I suggest adding more, or do another chapter. Maybe at thr end you can put yo be continued?!!?

    Dec 28, 2017

  • hello I will continue the chapter i will make a series I will try my best to make more detail words and stronger scenes

    Dec 30, 2017

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