Dec 27, 2017 | Rating : | Written by Josh Will
The Legend Of Entity 303 2 Rain Of Null Read Count : 119

Category : Books-Fiction

Sub Category : Adventure
When they where done packing they went on the boat to go to the other island to camp out their. And so when they got their steve helped make the tent then they finished making the tent and when they went to sleep John heard foot steps so John went out of the tent to see what was happing then he saw Entity 303 he said why are you walking on this island then Entity 303 said nothing child but join me and I will make you a great powerful kid you will be Null that will kill everything in your path then John said yes I will kill everything in my path then Entity 303 said okay then come then he and John vanished out of sight. To be continued

Comments

  • Haylee Lala

    Haylee Lala

    Josh will you cant rate ur own story.

    Dec 27, 2017

  • Dave Begley Poet

    Dave Begley Poet

    Is this a joke? Or are you really a young boy? If you’re not a young lad then I suggest that you play cars or something. Pretty awesome if you’re 4 years old. There their they’re. Work on them

    Dec 27, 2017

  • yea

    Dec 27, 2017

  • No punctuation, no quotations when they speak, Steve's name is not properly capitalized, and you are getting there mixed up with their.

    Dec 29, 2017

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