Beware The Song Of Loralie Read Count : 148

Category : Stories

Sub Category : Horror
Once thare was a little boy who's name was Mark and he was spoiled.

 One day he said to his father that he hated his sister Loralie . His father said nothing and thought nothing about it.

  That night his mom called thim in for dinner, mark came but ... Loralie didn't .

His father stepped outside to see if he saw her as it was unusual for her to disobay . 

His father didn't see her and called the police .

 It took months for the family to realize the horrible stinch coming from the woods behind their house. His grandparents was visiting one spring and with them brought a doll that looked just like Loralie to ease her mother. 

She had horrid dreams of a man hitting Loralie and sometimes worse .  Mark would act strange as soon as you even brought up the doll, much less took it out of the gold and diamond jewelry box she had specially made for it . 

lt played a tune Loralie would walk around singing . It was called The Song of the Sea , a beautiful song

 .Loralie was adopted and had a amazing voice but she was shy about it . One day Mark's mother heard him laughing but he was in his room ALONE . His mother called ,"Mark? Is someone In there ?" Mark didn't reply. 

Sometimes she would walk by his room door and would hear Loralie singing her tune . 

Years later, Mark was founf dead in his room , but the odd thing was , it was on Loralies birthday, the day she went missing.

Comments

  • i updated it so i hope evryone can reed it

    Jan 05, 2018

  • postively distubing

    Jan 03, 2018

  • may be you should write it in paragraphs :)

    Jan 04, 2018

  • This is great! disturbing things that make you cringe, lol. enjoyable.

    Apr 03, 2018

  • This is really good disturbing but good Id read this to a misbehaving child and tell them if they don't behave the spirits of the two children would come for them

    May 03, 2018

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