Tormented Dream Read Count : 165

Category : Books-Fiction

Sub Category : Suspense/Mystery
"Ooh this poor girl,I feel so sorry for her, she is just wasting her time" those were the voices of the neighbourhood traders when ever they see Amina going for studies. Amina was used to those comments even though they hurts her feelings when she heard them but she ignored. Amina was the third born of his parents, the first and second born were also ladies and the last born called sham was a boy. Amina was in Junior high school, form 1 and sham was in primary 4 whereas her two elder sisters run from home and no body knew their where about. 
Amina was a brilliant girl and also a hard working girl,she was from a very poor family of which everyone was aware of in her community. Funding for her school needs and her brother's was always a huge problem for her parents, and this was just getting the materials necessary for learning because Amina was so good that she managed to get herself a scholarship in her junior high school. So the problem here was sham's fees and their learning materials. Amina's parents were farmers and they sell some of their farm produce for money.
What was even the problem was Amina's biggest dream of becoming a medical doctor someday. The question is, with this her un-intentionally unsupportive family,how will she actualize her dreams,will she be able to make it? What are the challenges that will come her way especially the fact that she is a lady, and how will she deal will them?.....Are there other family members aside from them, where are they?

Comments

  • good start

    Jan 02, 2018

  • Tara Grace

    Tara Grace

    great story idea, with a few grammar fixes and plot developments it could turn out really well.

    Jan 03, 2018

  • Wummar Jabir

    Wummar Jabir

    Thank you.

    Jan 03, 2018

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