The Creepy Closet Pt.1 Read Count : 52

Category : Books-Fiction

Sub Category : Horror
Mom why do we have to stay here? Hunny we talked about this. Mom why can't I go live with dad?! Don't you ever say that again! *Slaps* I HATE YOU I SEE WHY DAD LEFT YOU!!! Sweety no I didn't mean it. Let's just go inside. *Sees how dirty it is* Mom I don't like it here. Give it a chance. Mom can we please go home??? CLAIRE BENITA SMITH! Fine. Umm...ma'am here is your room key. Thank you. No problem. *Goes to room 808* Mom this room looks creepy. *Smells air*  IT STINKS MOM!
It's from the closet. That's weird it's empty and dark REALLY dark. AH MOM! IT'S GOT ME! HELP ME!HELP! 

Comments

  • practice story structure so its not one giant paragraph, dont be afraid to elaberate it sounds like a good beginning for a story.

    Jan 01, 2018

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