Halloween
Read Count : 115
Category : Stories
Sub Category : Horror
Hi I'm kate and this is the story how me and my friend/Alex killed this girl\ Emily it all started in 9 grade when Emily would bully us all year she would make fun of us all day ever day and on Halloween and egg our houses but its our turn but we are friends now ;) Well this year at Halloween we went to my house to get candy first and then we went to Alex house second and well we were walking to get candy she eat mine and Alex's candy and choked and the candy how to razor blades in it and poison and me and Alex laughed and left her there to die
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its a really dark with no substance, (while im sure this is just a horror story) you need to be more discriptive and list reasons why these characters are so hateful. they also need to get caught in the end otherwise you will just upset your audience and your reputaion as a writer will die before it ever begins.
Jan 01, 2018