Dec 18, 2017 | Rating : | Written by Miss Delighlah
California Read Count : 164

Category : Poems

Sub Category : N/A
Beautiful waters possess our beach,
Long, thick wood bricks have green leaves atop.
California, you're a pretty place.
But what's inside?
A variety of wanna bes and pretty faces.

Comments

  • As someone who grew up in California, I appreciate a poem about it. Now as a critic, I couldn't spot your style. I liked it, but it wasn't you (not that I stalk your profile and read all your works and found your writing style). I also didn't see all the effort. Sorry for harsh criticism, that's just what I do. But with all seriousness, nice work. ~Lee

    Dec 18, 2017

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