Haunted → Prologue Read Count : 138

Category : Books-Fiction

Sub Category : Horror
⚠ Prologue ~ Sleepovers ⚠

      Nothing really happens in sleepovers. We sit in the sofa, we watch a movie, we play stupid games and we sleep in someone's house, nothing more than that. It wasn't my first one (unlike Darcy...the poor girl didn't stop asking questions), but sure it was the most memorable one.
      Chris always liked to jump off things. I believed that he would scream "I BELIEVE I CAN FLY" if I threw him off of a building. He did have a soft spot for getting into trouble, what eventually led to the Ouija board. An Ouija board isn't nothing bad at all, because it moves with your mind, not with supernatural forces.
      It's used to scare people off. He brought one to Shawn's house, probably just to scare someone. Darcy, perhaps.
      Shawn is one of my best friends. He's rich, like really rich, he could swim in a pool of his own money. If he could swim, that is. He's the kind of person that can sense a good friend miles away.
      Chris is always messing with him. They're childhood best friends, I get it, but it's annoying. Especially when he forces him to make sleepovers and watch scary movies.
      This night, it wasn't much different.
      "What movie is it?" Darcy asked, flipping some of her blonde hair right on my face. This wasn't much of her thing, to be honest — but I wouldn't be the only girl again.
      "If we tell you it isn't gonna be cool," Chris told her, slapping Shawn in the head at the same time. "Watch out, son of a unicorn!" Cursed the brunette, kicking him. "What kind of insult is that?! Son of a unicorn?"
      He finally put the movie and returned to the huge sofa. We looked at the TV and expected to see something. 
       Until it happened.
       It was all very sudden; the red letters in the screen, ‘Look outside your window’, Shawn looking outside of the window, his grey eyes widened with terror.
      We all came to see.
      In the neighbor's land, a hooded figure looked at us, and I swear I saw its head. A skull.
      "Run."

Comments

  • Haylee Lala

    Haylee Lala

    Hi, im one of thr owners of this game. A talented writer, can you please add more details?

    Nov 28, 2017

  • Açucena Alijaj

    Açucena Alijaj

    Thanks! I'll keep that in mind.

    Nov 29, 2017

  • It's great! If your looking for suggestions it would help readers understand more if you explained with more detail so no further questions could be made keeping on edge is also a good thing in this type of story you should use more negative then positive words to create a foggy layer instead of a misty layer.

    Nov 28, 2017

  • Açucena Alijaj

    Açucena Alijaj

    Everyone, this is my previous account. To go to my new one, click on my profile picture! 🙂

    Apr 14, 2018

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