No Escape From Your Nightmares #1 "Yourself" Read Count : 91

Category : Books-Fiction

Sub Category : Horror
You wake up like any other day but you felt different like you forgot something like this isn't the way you should be feeling

              Unordinary 
                 
But you get out of bed and went to your job as a employee of a corner store but you see all the other employees are different as if they were all depressed and sad 
              
              Strange

But you choose to not be bothered by it you finished your shift and went home but as you went to home you notice how quickly it got dark but you went to sleep, but you automatically woke up you got out of bed and looked around you were certain that this is a dream, you continue to look around and see that this is your house that you lived in 10 years ago when you were 23. You see your old closet and a man in a hoodie comes from the shadows and slowly walked towards you. Then you have memories and started running but you were upstairs so you take a quicker way and jump out of a window as if you have no opinion on what you do your body just moved and when you hit the ground oddly you felt nothing

   When you began running you remembered a certain event in your life and why your running, "On december 1st 2003 you and some friends went to a bar, you got drunk you were so depressed and sad after that, you went home with a bottle of some alcohol which you don't remember. When you got home you sat in the closet drinking and drinking you start to feel claustrophobic and so depressed, and as you stayed in that closet more you got more drunk and sad, then soon you got to the point where your life didn't matter you walked out of the closet, you seem to be so drunk you see yourself and you just so happened to have a gun"

You continued running but hands came from the ground and grabbed your feet
Your stationary and terrified the you in the hoodie comes back he pulls a gun from his pocket, your scared about the fact that he's moving so fast to you but he's just walking like death has come to take you but you DON'T WANT TO DIE!!!

You break loose and went back to running but you look towards the earth and see that there is no more earth forward, like an end of the world, with no hesitation you jumped, but the you in the hoodie grabs you before you fall, your heart raced you couldn't breath, he looked at you and pulled you up and takes his gun from his pocket, and slowly he takes off his hoodie, death has revealed his face he look so happy to kill you, DEATH HAS CAUGHT YOU IN HIS GRASP and now death will take you away, he pulls the trigger, but then you wake up to your 2nd nightmare.
    

Comments

  • Good start. This reads like a prologue but could use a little more detail.

    Dec 06, 2017

  • Joseph Johnson

    Joseph Johnson

    thanks

    Dec 06, 2017

  • Jonathan Langway

    Jonathan Langway

    wow this is amazing so scary

    Dec 06, 2017

  • Good emotional description

    Dec 08, 2017

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