Category : Books-Fiction

Sub Category : Horror

Chapter one

(Mel's P.O.V)

ok ok so maybe i was being a bit harsh on him but this thing was his idea after all.

Timmy had decided it would be a good idea to go and check out the gig at the old abandend hotel. It had been boarded up for years but then this weird goth band -i cant even remember their name- decided it would be a cool place to debut themselves, and of course Timmy being Timmy and being into all that thought he'd like to check out, and little old me got dragged along for the ride.

"Oh come on Mel, these guys are actually quite good" Timmy was complaining because i was just stood there with my arms crossed defensivly over my chest.

Aren't you enjoying it?" Timmy was trying his best to convince me but no matter how hard he tried it wasn't going to work.

I stared at him angrily "no, I'm not enjoying it" I turned away 

"I'm going to the bathroom" i said as i walked away" if i can find it that is" as i stalked off Timmy decided that he needed the bathroom too. 

So we both walked in silence. we eventually found the bathroom and it turned out to be a unisex room so we both went in.

"You know we're er kinda all alone in here" i knew what he was hinting at and i guess that this was the only reason i'd agreed to come along with him because i knew if he was in a good mood it would be a great night for me.

"eww Timmy it's gross in here" id just about use the toilet in here. It was caked in dust and cobwebs were everywhere. I would'nt even sit on the seat i squatted to pee in the bowl but when you gotta go you gotta go.

"Ah come on, i know that this was the only reason you came" damn he'd figured me out was i really that easy to read.

"Yeah maybe it was but not here" i was having a hard time trying to convince myself let alone Timmy especially the way he kept kissing my neck i was getting more and more in the mood.

"God Timmy just stop will ya" i murmered as he nibbled on my ear

" Why am i getting you all hot and bothered?" he was and he knew it and as he shoved his hand in my knickers i could resist no longer.

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It wasnt until i was putting my knickers back on that i realised that the hotel had gone quiet. Had the gig finished? were we the only people left? I walked back to the room where the gig was supposed to be with Timmy hanging on my arm. It was eeriely quiet. We got to the room and realised that the gig was long finished and that myself and Timmy were the only people left in the hotel, had we really been in the bathroom that long?

"What are we gunna do?" asked Timmy sounding a tiny bit worried.

"How the hell should i know" i snapped then i realised i shouldnt of snapped like that but this was his idea after all. 

"Look im sorry ok but i really don't know what to do" i thought for a second." Maybe we should try to get out of here first" Timmy seemed to acknowlege that this was good idea so we set off to try to find the exit.

Wed been walking round in circles for hours- or at least thats what it seemed like- when i felt it. It felt like a hand on my shoulder. At first i thought it was Timmy till i realised he was too far away. 

"Who's there" i called out.

"It's just me" Timmy answered my question. i sighed and walked over to Timmy who was sitting on the bottom step of what looked to be the main staircase.

"This place is freaking you out too isn't it?" Timmy could tell i was starting to lose it. I was sure that the main entrance had been here just a couple of hours ago. I wiped my sweaty forehead with the back of my hand all this walking was starting to tire me out. All my senses were telling me to keep going but it was taking all my strength to keep my eyes open. Why was i so tired all of a sudden? And as i lay my head on Timmy's shoulder all i saw was a black shape drifting towards us i tried to shout out but all that came out of. my mouth was air.

I turned my head and realised that the shoulder i was leaning on was no longer Timmy's.

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Chapter one 

(Timmy's P.O.V)

Jeez there was no need for the 'tude so yeah maybe this whole thing had been my idea but i thought Mel would enjoy it after all i thought she enjoyed this kind of thing.

This new goth band - Karate Kicks they called themselves- where debuting themselves at the old hotel. Yeah it had been  boarded up for years but what better place to debut a goth band than an old creepy hotel.

"Oh come on Mel these guys are actually quite good"  i shouted over the music "aren't you enjoying it?" i tried to convince her but all she was doing was standing with her arms crossed over chest i could she wasn't enjoying it but i had a plan.

Mel stared at me I could tell she was angry "no I'm not enjoying it" and she turned away.

"I'm going to the bathroom" she sulked stalking off "if i can find it that is" 

This was my opportunity to put my plan into action so i followed her hoping that i could somehow drag her to an old bedroom. Turns out i didn't need to worry about that as the bathroom was unisex.

I leaned in close to her and whispered in her ear,

"You know we're kinda er all alone in here"

Mel recoiled from my words.

"Eww Timmy it's gross in here"

i knew she meant it because she didn't even sit on the toilet seat she just sort of squatted over the bowl. I nuzzled in closer.

"Ah come on, i know that this was the only reason you came"

i was getting to her i could tell i started nibbling her ear.

"Yeah maybe but not here" I continued nibbling her ear.

"God Timmy just stop will ya" she was trying convice me but she was having a hard time convinicing herself let alone me.

"Why am i getting you all hot bothered" she murmed slightly and i knew i had her so i put my hand in her knickers.

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We were getting dressed when it dawned on me  that the hotel had gone quiet. Was the gig over already? Where was everyone else? We walked back to the main room arm in arm.It was so quiet it was creepy. We reached the main room and i realised that the gig had finished ages ago and we were alone. How long had we been in the bathroom?.

What are we gunno do? I asked there was no hiding the worry in my voice. 

How the hell should I know? Mel snapped. I looked at her and her face softened.

"Look I'm sorry ok but I really don't know what to do" she went quite as if she was thinking. "Maybe we should try to get out of here first" that seemed like the best thing to do so I agreed.

We'd been walking around for ages getting nowhere I was exhausted so I sat down on the bottom step of what looked like the main staircase.

"Who's  there?" Mel shouted she sounded terrified.

"It's just me" I shouted  back trying my best to calm her down. She sighed and came over and sat down next to me.

"This place is freaking you out too isn't it?" Mel was starting to panic truth is I was too, I'd been convinced the main entrance was here not long ago.

Mel wiped her forehead with the back of her hand she seemed so tired all of a sudden come to think of it I was struggling to stay awake too.

Mel layed her head in my shoulder just as a black shape drifted towards us.

All I saw next was blackness and Mel was gone.