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Oct 22, 2017 | Rating : | Written by Kirstin Ralston

They Whisper.. Read Count : 131

Category : Stories

Sub Category : YoungAdult

Some call me a killer, or a murder...Some even say I'm just a 11 Year-old girl that needs mental help...or a ghost whisperer

My brother, Devon, and I live in the abandoned child center...

They make me do things..I hate to do..so I can keep my younger brother safe..

Have you ever had a through that your mind was be read by someone or something...I do...all the time...



Lol this is my second story, not that good, but I hope you like it!

Comments

i love the first part but besides that its short and needs more detail

Oct 22, 2017
its good, add more detail, even if its only a tease, make it more intresting

Oct 22, 2017