Near The Sea Read Count : 179

Category : Books-Fiction

Sub Category : Fantasy
It felt so fresh, so real, like I belonged in the saltwatered air and the breeze. Before this happened, I was driven out of curiosity of what this world can really do for me. I told my father about this, and he told me to look around the corner or something to see if I liked it, and I did. But little did I know, something bad would happen. For a second, I thought about it but forgot it. -AFTER DINNER- I slipped in my gown and brushed my teeth and threw myself in the bed, and was sleep. -BOOOM-  I awoke from a dangerous noise, so loud my dad ran in my room with his shotgun. We looked around the room, and then noticed the shadowy figure right in front of our eyes as it grew into the mist. Dad mumbled something bad and went back to his room. I layed there wondering about what that was. I heard a blood screaching cry out my window and climbed through it. I followed the screaming by the sea where my dad's​ body was laying there and I saw the shadowed figure again but this time it talked. "Come my child, I will only set your father free if you take his place". I knew I had to choose. I choose to let my father go. Then the figure grabbed me and threw me in the ocean and my body felt a sensation and exploded into the mist.

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  • Apr 23, 2017

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