True Fear...
Read Count : 164
Category : Stories
Sub Category : Suspense/Mystery
Lots of people think they know true fear, but oftentimes, they are dead wrong. A few years back I had everything going my way, sort of. My life was great, a loving family, good friends, and lots of potential, but I wasn't too sure. I had gone to one school since I was four years old, I was transferring to a public school. I was excited, I thought it would be great, no half hour car ride to school, go to the same school as lots of my friends. That all changed one day. I never considered all the bullies. The worst pa rt is, even the teachers were bullies. There was one kid that everyone feared, his name was Alex. He wasn't your average bully, he didn't go and say mean things. He would try to kill you, literally KILL YOU. He normally picked on my friends, I started to fight back for them since not all of them were very strong. Unfortunately I became his target, every day he would hit me a couple times. Eventually he started to try and kill me to. At this point I asked my parents if I was allowed to end a fight. My parents said I could as long as I didn't start the fight. Every day he would bully me, I would hit back, the most satisfying time I fought back was when he charged me with a pair of scissors and I clotheslined him. Best part is he wore glasses and my thumb hit the bridge of his glasses, he had a bruise there for a while. One day i beat him up so badly he quit bullying my friends and I. In the end he became my friend. Then he just disappered. I hope you enjoyed this story. Until next time...
Comments
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Dani-renée Kephart
This piece is a little repetitive. you should also try to add some more variety within the sentence structure.The story also needs and ending or a sort of cliff hanger and an intro in order for it to be a great story. Its something to catch the readers eye! good other than that!
Oct 17, 2017